Thursday, September 26, 2013

Thor's Day

Read Huck Finn chapters. Finish 15 for Friday.
Huck Finn on Tape
Vocabulary for tomorrow: 11-20
Huck Finn Vocab
People who haven't handed in the college application essay on a meaningful extra-curricular activity (there are two other prompts. See below 

Journal: Today you will write a paragraph arguing that Pap Finn should not have his parental rights taken away.
Typical arguments:

Journal yesterday: In modern-day Oregon, if a parent is considered by the court to be unfit, parental rights are terminated and the child becomes a ward of the state and enters the foster parent system, or arrangements are made for the child to live with a relative. Your journal assignment is to explain why Pap's parental rights should be terminated. Base your argument on the bullet points in the following document that lists grounds for termination of parental rights: Grounds for Termination of Parental Rights. Focus your argument on just ONE of the things that make a parent unfit, as the court sees it. 

Write a minimum of 4 sentences

1. Topic sentence--your idea stating why Pap shouldn't be Huck's legal father anymore


2. Example from Huck Finn


3. Explanation


4. Concluding sentence (which should transition to the next point 


Example 1--Physical abuse

Focus on ONE idea (either abuse, OR abandonment, OR alcolholism)
When you do this you must have four sentences that explain why Pap's rights should be terminated. In expository writing you must support your argument with evidence.

In groups of four, you will revise one another's paragraphs. Be sure that your paragraph focuses just on one point. 

  • [topic sentence] A parent is considered unfit when the child is severely abused, and Pap Finn has clearly abused Huck. 
  • [example] For example, in the cabin Pap gets the delirium tremens and beats Huck, finally taking out a knife and trying to kill Huck.
  • [explanation]Any parent who physically abuses his child to this extent is unfit to be a parent because children need to be safe.  
  • [conclusion]The court has the responsibility to protect the child by terminating parental rights.
Example 2
Pap is unable to take care of Huck because of his long term mental illness from alcohol. Pap drunk alcohol way too much which caused him to get delirium tremens that almost made him kill Huck.It made him go crazy which would make him

Example 2 focusing on three ideas:

A parent is considered unfit when the child is severly abused. Pap Finn is clearly an unfit parent. He has repeatedly negleted his child, not allowing Huck to go to school. Abandoning his child by locking him in the cabin for days at a time. Excessive use of alcohol, Pap goes into a psychotic state and tries to kill poor Huck. These are just some of the reasons Pap Finn is an unfit parent  
Friday you will have a vocab quiz covering this weeks words.
Essay prompts:
1. 1. Northwestern--James Joyce wrote in "Dubliners," "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." Describe a mistake or mistaken idea of your own that led to a discovery (a growing experience).

2. USC--The 18th century French philosopher Denis Diderot said, “Only passions, great passions can elevate the soul to great things.” Describe one of your passions and reflect on how it has contributed to your personal growth. Think about what you really like to do and how it has made you a better person. For this essay you’ll be writing about something you feel strongly about. For the next essay you’ll be writing about something you have done

3Harvard--Please describe which of your activities (extracurricular and personal activities or work experience) has been most meaningful and why.

No comments:

Post a Comment